My Domain is inside this closed wall
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I think we all feel like that from time to time. For some of us, it’s a feeling that passes, for others, it’s how we being to live our lives. Great post.
This is so powerful. I think we’ve all lived behind a wall like this at one time or another. It takes work and support to break it down.
It’s a great poem with so much wisdom on it and it’s a very strong one. This is definitely a timely poem for everybody that’s fighting this pandemic we’re all in. Hope and pray that everyone will make it through.
I would quite like to see this poem animated into a TedEd or The School of Life style animation. It really has that quality to it!
Great poem and so much wisdom in there. We hove in the wake of Pandemic and we have duty to protect our next generation.
What a powerful poem I really like it. I have to say that I feel that way from time to time.
Very powerful lines portraying the emotions of the soul. Like your poetry, amazing and keep going ahead.
You Just made my day. Such a beautiful poetry .
Great poem. I can feel all the emotions along the lines. At one point, I feel like that too. I think it’s so challenging but we really need to be strong so that we can escape the closed walls.
So many of us hide what we feel behind a mask and it takes a smart person to even realize there is a mask present, and no one can guess what’s really inside, often not even the person who does the feeling and wears a mask.
Very beautiful poem. I love it.
Although the poem is a bit dark, it is very thought-provoking and stimulating. You are an excellent poet. Keep writing.
I enjoyed reading this piece. Very well written and conveys a lot of emotion.
Chills! No kidding! You write well and you always thrill me!
This is honestly, such a beautiful peace of writing. Well done…it’s been a long time since I have read something so powerful.
This is such a beautiful poem indeed, love that words can create such calm
Mindblowing poem. I can feel your emotion.
Today is my hustle day until I read your poem, such a nice one!
This is such a powerful yet beautiful poem! I love the part when you mentioned that a vein can mask reality