Very deep. I could feel the pain through your words. May I ask—what inspired you to create this?
This is a very nice poem that transmits a lot of emotion. Congratulations for writing it.
Your pain is tangible through the depth of your words. Thank you for sharing you vulnerability. I do hope that you have found light in the darkness, a hand to hold, and a mind to listen as you navigate this dark time.
this is so deep girl, thank you for sharing this, You are so brave and strong.
Very beautiful poem, full of emotion. Thanks so much for sharing your work.
This made me shed a tear. I can totally relate to this!
for so long, only now that i have read another poem. i miss writing one. anyway, yours made me cry for readings i cant truly comprehend.
I love your poem. Poems need passion and creativity for its writer and I think you got both.
How well you have gotten raw emotion into your words.
What a profound sad tho, dark poem. Makes me want to cry and crawl in to hug the personae at the same time.
This was very beautifully written. I could really feel the emotion and pain in the words. I look forward to reading more entries. Thanks for sharing!
Such a beautiful poem. SO deep. Sometimes, it hurts to even breathe and you have described it so beautifully in words!
This was absolutely beautiful wow!